Overall Literary Score - Sherri Crandall
Lexi the Butterfly
Overall Literary Score: 98/100
PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction
Sherri Crandall’s Lexi the Butterfly is an exceptionally tender and meaningful children’s story that combines imaginative storytelling with a powerful message about adoption, faith, identity, and unconditional love.
The story follows Lexi, a small purple butterfly who becomes separated from her mother during a frightening storm. Through the kindness of Jo Jo and the Hawk family, Lexi discovers safety, acceptance, and a new home. Sherri presents this emotionally sensitive subject with remarkable gentleness, allowing young readers to understand loss and adoption without overwhelming them.
One of the book’s greatest literary strengths is its accessibility. The language is warm, clear, and age-appropriate, while still carrying emotional depth for parents, caregivers, teachers, and adopted children. The woodland setting, memorable animal characters, and gentle touches of humor create an inviting story world that balances serious themes with comfort and joy.
The book’s central message is expressed beautifully through Lexi’s words:
“I know I don’t look like a hawk, and I don’t eat like a hawk, but Mama Hawk has told me all creatures are the same in God’s eyes.”
This passage captures the emotional and spiritual heart of the story. It teaches children that differences do not diminish their worth and that belonging is created through love rather than appearance.
The image of love as starlight is another outstanding literary moment:
“Love was like starlight, it could shine from many different places but was always just as warm and bright.”
This tender metaphor offers reassurance that love can continue across separation, change, and distance. It is simple enough for a child to understand, yet meaningful enough to remain with adult readers long after the book is finished.
Beth Snider’s illustrations complement the narrative beautifully, bringing Wildflower Meadows, the Hawk family, and Lexi’s emotional journey to life. The artwork enhances the warmth, wonder, and readability of the book without overpowering its message.
PIHBA Literary Evaluation
Literary CategoryScoreOriginality and Creativity98/100Storytelling and Narrative Structure97/100Character Development97/100Language and Age Appropriateness99/100Emotional Impact100/100Theme Development99/100Faith and Inspirational Value100/100Organization and Flow97/100Reader Engagement98/100Visual and Literary Cohesion99/100
Final Assessment
Lexi the Butterfly demonstrates outstanding literary quality within the children’s genre. Sherri Crandall handles adoption, separation, healing, and belonging with compassion, clarity, and emotional wisdom. Her story offers reassurance to children who may feel different while reminding every reader that family is created wherever love, protection, and acceptance are found.
Inspired by Sherri’s own family adoption experience, the story carries an authenticity that gives its message even greater meaning. It is not only a beautiful children’s book but also a valuable resource for families, schools, churches, adoption communities, and anyone helping a child understand where they belong.
Final Literary Rating
98/100 – PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction
Judge’s Closing Commentary
Sherri Crandall has created a gentle and enduring story that gives children the language to understand adoption, difference, and belonging. Through Lexi’s journey, readers discover that being chosen is beautiful, every child is wonderfully made, and the strongest families are held together by unconditional love.
PIHBA Literary Excellence Evaluation
Prestigious International Hope Book Awards - Official Judge's Evaluation
Book Title: What the Body Carries: PTSD, Burnout, and the Hidden Trauma of the American Workforce
Author: Stephanie Beene
Award Categories Evaluated:
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Best Grief, Loss & Bereavement Healing
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Best Mental Health & Trauma Awareness
Overall Literary Score: 96/100
PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction
Literary Score Breakdown
CategoryScoreOriginality & Purpose20/20Literary Craft & Writing Quality18/20Organization & Structure19/20Emotional Impact20/20Hope, Healing & Lasting Influence19/20
Final Score: 96/100
Awarded: PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction
Judge's Commentary
Stephanie Beene has written a compelling and deeply relevant work that gives language to a form of suffering that countless individuals experience but rarely know how to describe. Rather than focusing solely on individual trauma, she courageously explores the cumulative emotional burden created by prolonged workplace stress, grief, financial instability, burnout, and chronic exposure to emotionally demanding environments. Throughout the manuscript, she reminds readers that trauma is often not a single catastrophic event but "many moments stacked without recovery," a central theme that is developed with remarkable consistency.
One of the book's greatest strengths is its emotional authenticity. Stephanie does not simply present theories; she invites readers into deeply personal experiences of witnessing death in the workplace, struggling with delayed wages as a single mother, navigating grief while maintaining professional responsibilities, and discovering that survival had quietly replaced living. These reflections transform abstract concepts into lived reality, allowing readers to recognize their own experiences within her story.
From a literary perspective, the manuscript demonstrates a clear, accessible writing style that balances research, reflection, practical application, and narrative storytelling. The short reflective passages create a steady emotional rhythm, while the organization guides readers naturally from recognizing trauma toward understanding healing and reclaiming personal identity. The final chapters leave readers with hope rather than despair, emphasizing that people were never meant to carry overwhelming burdens alone and that restoration begins with awareness and permission to heal.
The book is especially effective in reframing grief beyond bereavement alone. Stephanie demonstrates how grief also includes the loss of safety, stability, identity, health, and future expectations. This broader understanding significantly strengthens the manuscript's contribution to conversations surrounding mental health and emotional healing.
Most importantly, What the Body Carries accomplishes what exceptional hope-centered literature should achieve: it validates invisible pain while offering readers the assurance that they are neither weak nor alone. By the conclusion, the reader is encouraged not merely to endure but to pursue healing with compassion toward themselves.
Literary Strengths
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Outstanding originality in addressing workplace trauma as a hidden public health and grief issue.
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Authentic personal storytelling that creates immediate emotional credibility.
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Excellent integration of practical insights with reflective narrative.
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Strong thematic consistency from introduction through conclusion.
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Accessible writing style suitable for both professionals and general readers.
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Powerful balance between emotional honesty and hopeful encouragement.
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A timely message with significant cultural and societal relevance.
Opportunities for Growth
This manuscript is already of exceptional literary quality. The primary opportunity for future editions would be the inclusion of a small number of additional personal case studies or recovery stories from individuals in different professions. While the author's own experiences provide strong credibility, a few broader perspectives could further strengthen the book's already impressive impact and demonstrate the universal nature of workplace trauma across diverse industries.
Final Evaluation
What the Body Carries is an emotionally significant and professionally written work that shines a compassionate light on invisible wounds carried by millions of workers. Stephanie Beene combines lived experience, thoughtful reflection, and practical wisdom to produce a manuscript that is both deeply moving and socially important. The work reflects exceptional literary quality while offering genuine hope to readers burdened by grief, burnout, trauma, and emotional exhaustion.
PIHBA is pleased to award this manuscript an Overall Literary Score of 96/100, earning the distinction of the PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction for its outstanding contribution to hope-centered literature.
- PIHBA Literary Excellence Evaluation
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Author: Anne Teagarden
Book: Still Fulfilled
Category: Hope, Healing and Personal Transformation
Overall Literary Score
94 / 100
Exceptional Literary Excellence
Score Breakdown
Inspirational Impact ............... 20/20
Quality of Writing ................. 14/15
Grammar & Editing ................. 10/10
Structure & Organization ......... 9/10
Storytelling ....................... 14/15
Originality ......................... 9/10
Depth & Purpose ................. 10/10
Professional Presentation ..... 4/5
Reader Impact ..................... 4/5
TOTAL: 94/100
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Judge's Commentary
Still Fulfilled is a beautifully written and deeply moving testament to faith, perseverance, and God's redeeming love. Anne Teagarden shares her journey with remarkable honesty and grace, transforming the pain of infertility into a powerful message of hope that will encourage readers facing their own unanswered prayers. Her authentic voice, strong literary craftsmanship, and unwavering faith create a lasting impact, making this book a truly deserving recipient of the Hope, Healing and Personal Transformation Award.
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Opportunities for Growth
Continued opportunities for growth are minimal. Future editions could further enrich the reader's experience by including additional personal reflections on the long-term journey after adoption, offering a brief update on how God's faithfulness has continued to unfold over the years. While the book is already exceptionally well written and impactful, these additions could provide even greater encouragement for readers walking similar paths.
PIHBA Literary Excellence Evaluation
Cultural Heritage and Identity Award.
Book: Listening to Chopin While Fighting Nazis: A Memoir (with Twenty Angels on Her Roof)
Author: Alex Charns
Overall Literary Score: 98/100
PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction
Alex Charns has produced a remarkable literary work that transcends the boundaries of memoir and historical narrative. Through meticulous research, compelling storytelling, and profound moral reflection, he explores the complexities of Polish identity, family legacy, faith, prejudice, sacrifice, and redemption during one of history's darkest periods. Rather than presenting history in simplistic terms, the author courageously examines uncomfortable truths while honoring those who demonstrated extraordinary courage under impossible circumstances. His work preserves cultural memory while encouraging readers to confront history with honesty, compassion, and hope.
PIHBA Literary Excellence Score Breakdown
CategoryScoreLiterary Quality & Style19/20Storytelling & Narrative Structure20/20Emotional Impact20/20Cultural & Historical Significance20/20Originality & Authenticity19/20
Final Score: 98/100
PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction
Strengths
Literary Excellence
Alex Charns writes with confidence, intelligence, and remarkable narrative control. His prose shifts naturally between historical investigation, memoir, and dramatic storytelling without losing clarity or emotional momentum. The writing remains engaging while addressing deeply complex historical and ethical questions.
Historical Authenticity
The extensive research supporting this manuscript is one of its greatest achievements. Drawing from family interviews, government records, historical publications, archival documents, and decades of investigation, the author creates a work that is both deeply personal and historically significant.
Cultural Heritage
This manuscript exemplifies the purpose of the Cultural Heritage and Identity Award. It preserves Polish history while honestly examining both the courage and the moral failures that existed during World War II. Rather than avoiding difficult conversations, the author encourages readers to understand the complexity of history through compassion and truth.
Emotional Resonance
The parallel structure between Twenty Angels on Her Roof and the memoir creates extraordinary emotional depth. The fictionalized experiences of young Basia are beautifully complemented by the author's lifelong search to understand his family's past, allowing readers to experience both the emotional reality of war and the lifelong impact of inherited memory.
Moral Courage
Perhaps the greatest literary strength of this work is the author's willingness to challenge his own inherited beliefs. Rather than simply celebrating family heroism, he openly wrestles with evidence of prejudice while still acknowledging genuine acts of bravery and sacrifice. This intellectual honesty gives the memoir exceptional credibility and depth.
Judge's Commentary
Listening to Chopin While Fighting Nazis is a courageous and intellectually honest contribution to both literature and historical remembrance. Alex Charns demonstrates that preserving cultural heritage requires more than celebrating the past—it requires the humility to examine it truthfully.
What distinguishes this manuscript is its refusal to simplify history into heroes and villains alone. Instead, it presents human beings in all their complexity, showing how courage, faith, fear, prejudice, sacrifice, and redemption often exist within the same family history. That level of honesty elevates the work far beyond a traditional memoir.
The author's decades-long search for truth, combined with extensive historical documentation and emotionally compelling storytelling, results in a work that preserves not only one family's legacy but also an important chapter of Polish and Jewish history. The manuscript invites readers to remember, reflect, and learn while honoring those who risked everything to protect others during unimaginable darkness.
For these reasons, the judging panel recognizes this work with the PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction, awarding an outstanding 98/100 for its exceptional literary craftsmanship, historical importance, emotional depth, and enduring contribution to cultural remembrance and hope
Overall Literary Score - Trish Lacy
Erased In My Home: A Story of Narcissistic Abuse, A Mother's Fight to Reclaim Her Voice
Overall Literary Score: 97/100
PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction
Trish Lacy's Erased In My Home is an exceptional memoir that combines emotional authenticity with compelling storytelling to illuminate the often-hidden reality of narcissistic abuse. Written with honesty, vulnerability, and remarkable clarity, the book captures the gradual erosion of identity while offering readers a powerful roadmap toward healing, freedom, and self-worth.
Rather than relying on sensationalism, Trish allows the emotional truth of her experiences to speak for itself. Her writing is reflective, purposeful, and deeply compassionate, creating an intimate connection with readers who may have endured similar circumstances. The narrative unfolds with excellent pacing, balancing heartbreaking moments with inspiring reflections that demonstrate resilience and personal transformation.
One of the book's greatest literary strengths is its ability to give language to experiences many survivors struggle to describe. Through thoughtful introspection and authentic storytelling, Trish transforms her personal journey into a universal message of hope. Her unwavering focus on protecting her daughter and breaking the cycle of abuse adds emotional depth and lasting significance to the memoir.
The manuscript is professionally presented, emotionally engaging, and impactful from beginning to end. Its consistent voice, strong thematic development, and meaningful message make it both an important literary work and a valuable resource for readers seeking encouragement and healing.
Literary Evaluation
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Originality & Authenticity: 20/20
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Writing Style & Narrative Voice: 19/20
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Emotional Impact: 20/20
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Organization & Story Development: 19/20
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Hope, Healing & Inspirational Value: 19/20
Final Score: 97/100
PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction
Judge's Commentary:
Erased In My Home is a courageous and beautifully written memoir that transforms silent suffering into a message of hope and empowerment. Trish Lacy writes with sincerity, grace, and emotional intelligence, allowing readers to witness not only the devastation of psychological abuse but also the extraordinary strength required to reclaim one's identity. Her work demonstrates outstanding literary quality while offering a powerful reminder that no voice is ever truly erased, and that healing begins the moment someone chooses to believe they are worthy of freedom. This is a highly deserving recipient of the PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction.
PIHBA Overall Literary Score
Zoë Collins - "Amor Fati: An Incredible True Story of Survival, Hope & Healing"
Overall Literary Score: 99/100
PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction
Score Breakdown
Literary CategoryScoreOriginality & Impact100/100Emotional Depth & Authenticity100/100Literary Craftsmanship98/100Narrative Structure & Flow98/100Character Development100/100Message of Hope & Transformation100/100Reader Engagement99/100Editing & Professional Presentation97/100
Judge's Commentary
Amor Fati is an exceptional work of literary memoir that combines remarkable storytelling with profound emotional honesty and extraordinary courage. Zoë Collins demonstrates exceptional literary skill by transforming deeply traumatic experiences into a compelling narrative that educates, inspires, and ultimately offers hope. Her writing possesses a rare balance of vulnerability and strength, allowing readers to witness both the devastation of trauma and the remarkable resilience of the human spirit.
One of the book's greatest literary strengths is its thoughtful structure. Rather than presenting a chronological account alone, Zoë masterfully intertwines reflection, insight, and emotional growth throughout each chapter. Her ability to explain the psychological realities of grooming, coercive control, captivity, grief, illness, and recovery demonstrates exceptional emotional intelligence and literary maturity.
The prose is eloquent, reflective, and deeply engaging. Every chapter contributes meaningfully to the overarching journey from survival to healing. Particularly powerful are the moments where she rediscovers trust through nature, horses, healthy relationships, counselling, and self-discovery. These moments provide emotional relief while reinforcing the central message that healing is possible, even after unimaginable suffering.
What distinguishes Amor Fati from many memoirs is its purpose. This book never seeks sympathy; instead, it seeks understanding. It gives survivors language for experiences they may never have been able to describe, while educating readers about the invisible nature of trauma and the extraordinary courage required to reclaim one's life. The result is a memoir that is both deeply personal and universally significant.
Beyond its literary excellence, Amor Fati leaves readers with something far greater than a story, it leaves them with hope. It is the kind of memoir that has the potential to change lives, encourage healing, and remind readers that their past does not determine their future.
PIHBA is proud to award Zoë Collins a Literary Excellence Distinction with an Overall Literary Score of 99/100, recognizing a memoir of exceptional literary quality, emotional depth, and lasting inspirational impact.
Overall Literary Score
Unveiling Shackles: A Journey from Discovery to Empowerment
By Sun-Diya Kumar
Overall Literary Score: 96/100
PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction
Unveiling Shackles: A Journey from Discovery to Empowerment is a compelling and courageous memoir that combines historical insight, cultural heritage, personal testimony, and emotional resilience into a powerful literary work. Sun-Diya Kumar demonstrates exceptional storytelling by weaving together the legacy of her ancestors with her own deeply personal journey toward healing, freedom, and self-empowerment. The result is a memoir that not only informs but also inspires readers to reflect on their own identity, purpose, and capacity to overcome adversity.
One of the book's greatest strengths is its authenticity. The author's willingness to explore painful experiences, including generational trauma, cultural expectations, arranged marriage, family conflict, discrimination, and emotional hardship, creates a narrative that is both honest and relatable. Rather than dwelling solely on suffering, the memoir continually points readers toward resilience, forgiveness, personal growth, and hope.
The historical foundation of the book adds significant literary depth. By preserving the story of the Girmit era and honoring the sacrifices of her ancestors, Sun-Diya offers readers an important cultural perspective that is rarely explored in contemporary memoirs. This historical context strengthens the emotional impact of the personal narrative and provides lasting educational value.
The author's reflections on faith, compassion, and humanity further elevate the manuscript. Rather than promoting division, she emphasizes universal values such as kindness, empathy, respect, and service to others, allowing readers from many backgrounds to connect with her message.
From a literary standpoint, the writing is engaging and emotionally sincere. The narrative flows naturally between history, memoir, and reflection while maintaining a consistent voice throughout the book. The descriptive storytelling allows readers to visualize the settings, understand the cultural traditions, and emotionally invest in the author's journey.
Literary Evaluation
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Originality & Storytelling: 19/20
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Emotional Impact: 20/20
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Literary Style & Voice: 18/20
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Message of Hope & Inspiration: 20/20
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Organization & Overall Presentation: 19/20
Strengths
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Outstanding emotional honesty and authenticity.
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Excellent integration of family history with personal memoir.
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Significant cultural and historical contribution.
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Strong inspirational message of resilience, identity, hope, and empowerment.
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Memorable reflections that encourage readers toward compassion, forgiveness, and personal growth.
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A unique voice that balances vulnerability with wisdom.
Opportunities for Growth
While the memoir is highly engaging, portions of the historical and reflective discussions occasionally become more detailed than necessary, slightly slowing the pacing in places. Some chapters could also benefit from additional editing to tighten repetition and improve sentence flow. These are minor refinements that do not diminish the overall strength or significance of the work but would elevate an already excellent memoir to an even higher literary standard.
Judge's Commentary
Unveiling Shackles is more than a memoir, it is a preservation of history, a celebration of cultural identity, and a testament to the remarkable resilience of the human spirit. Sun-Diya Kumar has transformed generations of pain into a message of hope that will educate, encourage, and inspire readers for years to come. Her courage to tell this story with honesty, grace, and compassion exemplifies the values celebrated by the Prestigious International Hope Book Awards.
PIHBA Literary Excellence Evaluation
Overall Literary Score: 99/100
PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction
Judge's Summary:
Broken: Learning to Live with the Missing Pieces is an exceptional poetry collection that demonstrates outstanding literary craftsmanship, emotional authenticity, and profound spiritual insight. Miranda Gericke possesses a distinctive poetic voice that is both deeply personal and universally relatable, transforming experiences of grief, bipolar disorder, loss, faith, and healing into a collection that offers lasting hope to readers.
The work excels through its consistent thematic development, vivid imagery, thoughtful symbolism, and seamless integration of faith without sacrificing authenticity. Each poem contributes meaningfully to an emotional journey that moves from brokenness toward restoration, creating a cohesive and memorable reading experience. The inclusion of personal tributes to family, reflections on mental health, and celebrations of love and future generations adds remarkable depth and balance to the collection.
The visual presentation enhances the poetry beautifully, making each page an immersive artistic experience. Most importantly, this collection fulfills the mission of the Prestigious International Hope Book Awards by encouraging healing, inspiring resilience, and reminding readers that even life's deepest wounds can become places where hope is born.
Miranda Gericke has created a work of exceptional literary merit that will continue encouraging, comforting, and inspiring readers for many years to come.
PIHBA Literary Score Breakdown
CategoryScoreLiterary Craftsmanship20/20Originality & Creative Voice20/20Emotional Impact20/20Theme & Message of Hope20/20Organization & Overall Presentation9/10Overall Score99/100
Awarded Recognition
PIHBA Literary Excellence Distinction (99/100)
Judge's Final Comment:
"Broken: Learning to Live with the Missing Pieces is a remarkable collection that exemplifies the highest standards of literary excellence while offering genuine hope to those walking through grief, mental health challenges, and life's deepest sorrows. Miranda Gericke has transformed her personal journey into a timeless work that beautifully reflects the healing power of faith, love, resilience, and hope."
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